For those who are interested in more directed examples of how to put together rising action, I point you to my blog at www.ldalford.wordpress.com. You can see it in the title block above. Right now, I am directly addressing the rising action in my newest (21st) novel with the working title Daemon. If you go back to the very first installment of the novel (with commentary), you will also be able to see the beginning scene of the novel. See if it meets all the critieria I wrote for a novel beginning.
In this novel commentary, I am directly addressing many of the points I talk about in this blog. Right now you can read about rising action, but we are slowly moving toward the climax of the novel. This novel is a very good tool because it has a tight climax followed by a very long falling action. The resolution is also interesting and, I think, nicely tied together (not everything is totally tied together in a good novel). You will have to wait a while to get to the climax and resolution. I’ll pass a secret to those who can’t wait. If you go to www.pilotlion.blogspot.com, you can find the novel with commentary is up beyond the climax. For right now, I think I’ll move on to the climax for just a while and discuss it.