12 October 2018, this blog is about writing in scenes. I’m focusing on the tools to build scenes. I’ll leave up the parts of a novel because I think this is an important picture for any novelist. I’m writing about how to begin and write a novel.
- The initial scene
- The rising action scenes
- The climax scene
- The falling action scene(s)
- The dénouement scene(s)
Announcement: I need a new publisher. Ancient Light has been delayed due to the economy, and it may not be published. Ancient Light includes Aegypt, Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness. If you are interested in historical/suspense literature, please give my novels a try. You can read about them at http://www.ancientlight.com. I’ll keep you updated.
Today’s Blog: The skill of using language comes from the ability to put together figures of speech that act as symbols in writing.
Short digression: back in the USA.
Here are my rules of writing:
- Entertain your readers.
- Don’t confuse your readers.
- Ground your readers in the writing.
- Don’t show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
- Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
Creativity is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and producing.
Here is the beginning of the scene development method from the outline:
- Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
- Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
- Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
- Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
- Write the release
- Write the kicker
First step of writing—enjoy writing. Writing is a chore—especially if you don’t know what you are doing, and you don’t know where you are going. Let me help you with that.
How do we gain the skills to write well? We began with reading. Reading allows us to gain the skills to write well, but imagination provides the impetus to write and especially to write modern literature.
What do you do when you have finished a novel? Many beginning writers imagine their work is done with the “—the end—“ on the last page—that’s really the beginning. When I first started writing my novels, I was the same way. I finished a novel and editing and went almost immediately into submitting. There isn’t really a problem with this, but I’ve discovered a much better way to approach the problem of marketing materials.
First, what is the problem of marketing materials? When you begin submitting, marketing, and promoting your novel, you will find many parallel requirements. If you are lucky enough to have a work accepted, you will find many more parallel requirements that your publisher needs and you need for marketing and promoting. Here is a quick list of what I call the long form:
Title of Work:
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse
- D. Alford
Type: Either Screenplay or Book
Length: Either # of words for books, or # of pages for screenplays
Keywords and Market Focus:
Fiction, curse, sith, fae, fairy, seelie, unseelie, Sherwood Forest, Britain, United Kingdom, MI6, covert, spy, goddess, Dagda, military, training; will fascinate anyone interested in covert operations, enchantment, and the fae—will appeal particularly to those who enjoy spy, mystery, and suspense novels.
Author Bio: Approximately 120 words
The finest entertainment in literature is an escape into a real and inviting culture—so asserts L. D. Alford, a novelist who explores with originality those cultures and societies we think we already know. He builds tales that make ancient people and times real to us. His stories uniquely explore the connections between present events, history, and the future—he combines them with threads of reality that bring fiction alive. L. D. Alford is familiar with technology and cultures—he earned a B.S. in Chemistry from Pacific Lutheran University, an M.S. in Mechanical Engineering from Boston University, a Ph.D. in Aerospace Engineering from the University of Dayton, and is a graduate of Air War College, and Air Command and Staff College. He is widely traveled and has spent long periods in Europe, Asia, and Central America. L. D. Alford is an author who combines intimate scientific and cultural knowledge into fiction worlds that breathe reality.
Synopsis: Approximately 500 Words
Shiggaion Tash is a screw-up. Not your run of the mill screw-up, rather, she is a truly royal screw-up. From the botched experiment in her graduate class at Oxford, where she exposed all her students to a radionuclide, to blowing the kneecap off her pistol range instructor at Sandhurst, Shiggaion is a screw-up. What’s worse is Sandhurst, sent her to Military Intelligence (MI) science where she released nerve gas and sent an entire floor to hospital. From there science sent her to section VIII, Clandestine Communications where she broadcast classified operational codes to Britain’s enemies. Section VIII sent her to Section V, counter-espionage reports, where she designed an organizational database system that lost all the reports. Section V moved her on to Section VII, Economic Intelligence. There, she dumped a load of contraband in the Thames. Section VII pushed her into Section N, a section that exploits the contents of foreign diplomatic bags. Shiggaion accidentally lost her identification badge inside a diplomatic pouch and caused an international incident. Section N passed her to Section D, Political Covert Actions and Paramilitary Operations. There, she wrecked an SUV and sent her teammates to hospital. Finally, Section D gave her over to Hostage Rescue. During a hostage recovery exercise Shiggaion accidently shot a hostage. It was a laser scored exercise, but she did make a mark—someone else did too. One of the instructors shot Shiggaion in the left buttocks with a tranq round.
Shaggaion woke strapped to a medical table with a pain in her left cheek and a drug induced headache. She also has to go–badly. Shiggaion can’t imagine such treatment. Shiggaion’s cries finally provoke a response. Sorcha Davis throws open the door, threatens Shiggaion with bodily harm, and christens her—Shiggy. To survive, indeed to be able to relieve her bladder, and to prevent bodily harm, Shiggy must acquiesce to Sorcha’s demands and accept her new name. She must do much more than that. Shiggy must acknowledge and admit to all her previous lapses of judgement and take responsibility for them.
Thus begins the training of Shiggy Tash. Sorcha dresses her, arms her (simulated weapons at first), trains her, punishes her, demeans her, and fashions her into a lady. All for the purpose, so says Sorcha, to make Shiggy a sensual and sexy spy who can woo the hearts of men and woman. Shiggy looks like a ditz—a very beautiful ditz after Sorcha is done, but a ditz. Sorcha needs an intelligent ditz who doesn’t look like a dangerous person or a spy at all. Shiggy isn’t so sure, plus there is much more to this business than simple or not so simple spying.
Sorcha tells her that they are part of Stela, an organization in British Intelligence that protects the UK from supernatural beings and events. Shiggy doesn’t believe in the supernatural and now she must work with it—she even meets some supernatural beings. What’s to become of Shiggy now?
Concept of the Work: Approximately 250 Words
The concept behind Sorcha is to show a truly flawed person who initially won’t take responsibility for her actions and bad judgement. The novel shows the transformation of a person of bad judgement, taste, and personality into a powerful and useful person.
A secondary concept in the novel is love and pursuit of love by gentlemen for a lady who isn’t used to anyone loving her and another woman who has never been loved because of her personality.
Registration: WGA, ISBN, or Library of Congress, Write the number.
Other Information: If you have more work, a website, anything interesting and professional, especially any awards or recognition.
Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si www.HearthGoddess.com, a matron rescues and educates the Queen of the fae.
Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer www.GoddessofLightNovel.com, a math genius girl gets a boyfriend and becomes a Japanese goddess.
Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire www.GoddessofDarkness.com, a British agent accidentally becomes involved with a vampire.
Khione: Enchantment and the Fox www.GoddessNovel.com, a graduate student discovers a demigoddess in modern Boston.
Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon www.AksinyaNovel.com, a Russian princess calls a demon to protect her family.
Dana-ana: Enchantment of the Maiden www.Dana-ana.com, the mystery of Dana-ana Goewyn.
Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth www.EnchantmentoftheHearth.com, the misadventures of archeologists in modern Greece.
Antebellum www.AntebellumNovel.com the mystery of a house that has been missing since the American Civil War and the girl who is called to it.
The Second Mission www.TheSecondMission.com is a historical fiction novel about ancient Greece published in 2003 by Xulon.
The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox is a science fiction series published by OakTara Fiction
The End of Honor (published, July 2008) www.TheEndofHonor.com
The Fox’s Honor (published Oct 2008) www.TheFoxsHonor.com
A Season of Honor (published Nov 2008) www.ASeasonofHonor.com
Ancient Light is a suspense series published by Broadstreet, Eleutheria, September 2014 in a three-in-one www.AncientLight.com.
Aegypt (second edition published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.Aegypt.com
Sister of Light (published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.SisterofLight.com
Sister of Darkness (published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.SisterofDarkness.com
More information is available at www.ldalford.com
L.D. Alford has more than 40 technical papers published in international journals on flight test, military policy, flight safety, space, and cyberwar. His military aviation writing is featured as Military Aviation Adventures on www.wingsoverkansas.com.
No one would expect Shiggy Tash to be anything more than a ditz. She’s even blond, but she may be the most dangerous person in British Intelligence—particularly to British intelligence.
Shiggy doesn’t believe in the supernatural. She’s living in a supernatural house with supernatural guardians, and meets all kinds of supernatural beings. Perhaps she needs to make a second appraisal.
What fun. A failed British agent with poor judgement who happens to be a cursed warrior. Is there any hope for Shiggy?
I left in the information for Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse. What I’ll do is go through this information, tell you why it’s important, and help show you how to do the same for your writing.
I’ll write more tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my author site www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
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